I kept skipping paragraphs and sometimes enitre pages looking for the next concept. The story itself has an amazing start, and I presume so is the rest of the story.
However, the engagement is below stellar and I couldn't perservere the torture. I will keep pushing through, however, since I really want to see what happens.
For the story, I will walk bearfoot on coal, jumping all over the place, for about a year or two. But eventually, I will have a rough draft of what he story could possibly be about. I'll also probably skip to the end.
